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nejiten-last glance by ~im-a-narutard:iconim-a-narutard:



                                             Claw and tooth,
                                             tooth and claw,
                                              its violence all the same

                                              Raising up my signal,
                                               telling him to stop,
                                                he surged across the field
                                               without a second thought
                                                  
                                               He was over me,
                                                Kunai at hand
                                               Ready and willing to end my life
                                             
                                               The kunai struck at my heart
                                               but i didnt want to die for
                                               the pain in that spot will be much
                                               worse when i die
                   
                                               Another kunai out of the blue,
                                                knocked it off its course to death

                                               Fear left my body because i knew
                                               i had more time.The kunai ripped
                                               at my headband    

                                               It revealed my weakness
                                               the mark that sealed my destiny,
                                                my destiny of pain.  

                                               That same destiny stopped
                                                when i met her

                                               My teammate and seceretly
                                                loved one,the one that saved
                                                my life.for she was the only reason,
                                                 i live right now.

                                                 Its time to return the favor,
                                                  by protecting her life with mine.

                                                 Time was of the essence since
                                                 our lives are both in danger

                                                  A barrage of weapons was coming
                                                  her way,but this was the time,i
                                                  protected her

                                                  She turned around and saw his
                                                  body sprawled on the ground
                                                   she wept over his body
                                                  wishing they would switch places

                                                    For she too had the seceret of love
                                                  wishing she could admit it before
                                                     his time of death.

                                                     Tenten now shared Nejis old destiny
                                                                 -Loneliness
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just a poem i wrote about neji and tenten
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~wambu-ku:iconwambu-ku: Feb 29, 2008, 7:08:02 PM
that makes me sad!!!
but it's really good!
did neji die? or did he get extremely maimed?

--
my famous last words, thanks to blogthings
"I dunno, press the button and find out."

in the beginning god said let there be light.
and the devil said " turn it off! i'm trying to sleep!"
~hinata-587:iconhinata-587: Mar 4, 2008, 7:56:42 PM
O.M.G. Sara that is so beautiful how do you come up with stuff like this!
~susan346:iconsusan346: Mar 8, 2008, 6:30:45 PM
That is the heart warmming thing i ever read.
~im-a-narutard:iconim-a-narutard: Mar 12, 2008, 7:11:55 PM
wow,the only people that replied were people i know.weird
~ten-ten5:iconten-ten5: Apr 24, 2008, 5:06:31 PM Mood: Compassion
that's awsome Sara even though I read I already
~im-a-narutard:iconim-a-narutard: Apr 24, 2008, 5:27:03 PM
thank you^^.omg your on deviantart.you barely ever come on