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Nejiten-First kiss by ~im-a-narutard:iconim-a-narutard:



One day 2 ninjas were in a field.One was Tenten and one was Neji.Tenten was having target practice and hitting every target in sight when she heard a noise.It was Neji coming through the bushes that were seperating the two fields.Tenten landed gracefully and said "What do you want?"He looked around and saw every one of the targets were hit in the bullseye."Wow,your amazing Tenten,want to fight?" "Um......sure" she replyed.Neji looked like he knew what he was doing but he was really lost in her eyes.Her big,hazel eyes just pulled him in and he didnt want to look away.He had to when she summoned her weapons.He snapped back to reality and quickly flew to the trees.All but one flew passed him.It was a kunai knife in his shoulder.'I'll need to activate my byakuygan if i want to win' he thought.So he activated it and focused again.He used his 64 palms attack.Direct hit."UGH!"Tenten said as she was hurled against a tree by a blow to the stomach.She fell to the ground on all fours and coughed up blood.She was weak now and she only had enough energy to summon weapons one more time.Neji didnt even think to look in the directing of Tenten because he thought he had won.Big mistake.He was about to grab Tenten and carry her home but he was met by about a thousand weapons coming his way.Pretty much all of them hit their target.A bloody Neji fell from the branch he was in and passed out.Tenten decided to wait for him to wake up.About an hour later he did.*wakes up and sees Tenten*"Tenten what are you doing here?" he said weakly."I was waiting for you" she said.He got up and pinned her against a tree and gave her a kissthat was so wonderful she didnt want it to ever end."Thanks for caring" he said to her."do you want me to walk you home?" he said."sure"she replyed happily.she had started blushing.when they got to Tentens house he said "do you want me to go in with you?" He said this because she looked sad he was leaving.She said yes.He came in and they sat down on the couch and watched some television for a while.He looked at Tenten and saw she was asleep.When he looked herhe couldnt help but think of how beautiful and graceful she was when she was fighting.He kissed her lightly on the cheek and said quietly "I love you Tenten." She mumbled im her sleep "I love you too Neji" He smiled and fell asleep with her.
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i finally have my first fanfiction!!!!!!
i didnt really know how to space everything so i just put it all together.hope you like it
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~Fluffy362:iconFluffy362: Feb 3, 2008, 10:30:44 AM Mood: Joy
AWSOME! Make another one!:D
~im-a-narutard:iconim-a-narutard: Feb 3, 2008, 10:32:15 AM
i made a typo.i put directing instead of direction
~wambu-ku:iconwambu-ku: Feb 3, 2008, 8:15:16 PM
that's so sweet! good job sara!
you really do need to make another one.
evey says so, too.
and neji.
and tenten.

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my famous last words, thanks to blogthings
"I dunno, press the button and find out."

in the beginning god said let there be light.
and the devil said " turn it off! i'm trying to sleep!"
~hinata-587:iconhinata-587: Feb 3, 2008, 8:37:13 PM
OMG I love this!!!!!!!!
~Fluffy362:iconFluffy362: Feb 4, 2008, 3:44:36 PM
She did an AWSOME job right?
~wambu-ku:iconwambu-ku: Feb 9, 2008, 3:03:29 PM
heck yes she did!

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my famous last words, thanks to blogthings
"I dunno, press the button and find out."

in the beginning god said let there be light.
and the devil said " turn it off! i'm trying to sleep!"
~Fluffy362:iconFluffy362: Mar 3, 2008, 6:06:02 PM
You should check out mine.:D
~ten-ten5:iconten-ten5: Apr 24, 2008, 5:16:55 PM Mood: Joy
OMG! I luv It thats sweet short story